This week in literacy we have been doing haiku poems. The rule with the haiku is the first and last line has to be 5 syllables and the second line is 7 syllables.
Autumn
Autumn time arrives
Leaves rustle in the strong breeze
Playing together
I feel the fresh air
Colours all over the grass
Winter time arrives
Hi Flynn,
I liked how you gave lots of detail about the topic. I like writing about nature, what do you like writing about?
From Charlie.
Hi Flynn!
I really liked your haiku poem about Autumn! I like how descriptive your choice of wording was and the detail! Great job!
What is your favourite season?
From Zara
Why Flynn,
I liked how you repetition in the seasons, maybe you could do all the seasons, just as an idea. I wrote about nature too!
What is your favourite season?
From Joanna.
Sorry Flynn, I was supposed to say ‘Hi’ instead of ‘Why’.
Hi Flynn, your blog is colourful and expressive! That poem was nice!
I love how you made it feel like it was Autumn!
Do you like Autumn too?
See you soon,
from Matilda
Hi Flynn
I really like your haiku poem it describes Autumn really well. You also talked about the crunchy leaves witch is good.
Great job Flynn from pat
Hi Flynn,
Your words were very descriptive and interesting to read. I liked how your poem made me feel as if I was in the poem and experiencing what you wrote.
Great Job!
Annabel
Hi Flynn,
I think your blog was really good, I liked how you did two verses not just one, you went above and beyond. I also liked how you described what you were learning it really helped me to understand the blog.
What is your favourite season?
From Owen
Hi Flyn,
Your poem was really descriptive and your picture related to the text. I loved doing Haiku’s in class and I also liked the concrete poem because it brought out your creativity. Good job!
Keira